Poem : The Few


The real me is truly  

Hidden behind a shadow 

Only a few know 

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13 thoughts on “Poem : The Few

  1. Amazing poem!😊
    I have a suggestion that it’s better to replace the word “truly” in the first line with the word “true” because it gives better rhyme to the poem, and it makes it a perfect haiku poem that this poem with the word “truly” doesn’t follow the haiku poem form because its syllables is (6,7,5) but when you replace it with the word “true” it becomes (5,7,5) syllables and a perfect haiku poem.

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